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Pre-Weekend Update
Jan. 24th, 2020 01:32 pm( Cut for feline and human medical stuff )
Read through my draft of Meadowville again. I feel as though the skeleton is ok, but the second half feels rushed. I need to find some way to space out the plot points so the reader has time to take each one in and react to it, rather than just going WAIT WHAT JUST HAPPENED? WAS THAT TIME TRAVEL? WHAT’S WITH THE RUTABAGAS AND THE CHALK DRAWINGS AND WHY DOES SHE SPEND SO MUCH TIME DESCRIBING THE FURNITURE?
Read through my draft of Meadowville again. I feel as though the skeleton is ok, but the second half feels rushed. I need to find some way to space out the plot points so the reader has time to take each one in and react to it, rather than just going WAIT WHAT JUST HAPPENED? WAS THAT TIME TRAVEL? WHAT’S WITH THE RUTABAGAS AND THE CHALK DRAWINGS AND WHY DOES SHE SPEND SO MUCH TIME DESCRIBING THE FURNITURE?
