Jul. 9th, 2019

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Jumping forward a few chapters so we can get the the part where the plot (?) finally starts to go somewhere:

It is early on a Sunday morning- even the church-going families are just getting breakfast ready. The early-morning fog is still lifting, and the air carries the scent of green grass. Untrammeled by school, Anna wakes early. The cat is awake too, and eventually Walt groans and yawns and decides he’d better get up and let them both outside. Read more... )Read more... )
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What do you do when you come across a story that’s either hilariously bad, or deliberately hilariously bad, but you’re not sure which?

80% of me wants to recommend this Agent Carter soulmate AU as an amusing Larry-Blamire-style parody, but 20% doesn’t want to embarrass the author if they are, in fact, innocently unaware of the redundancies filling their prose: reiterations of what has just been stated in an earlier sentence, or an earlier clause of the same sentence, almost as if the characters, or the author, were repeating themselves.

Oh well. 

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