I even prayed to Keith Moon (that was not a YouTube suggestion, I was just getting frustrated enough that if I’d had anything explosive I probably would’ve shoved it into the pipes and covered my ears).
If Keith Moon didn't dislodge it, you definitely needed a plumber. It just feels like cheating that it didn't fix the problem.
how to write dialogue that doesn’t just sound like two 21st-century guys, without pushing the dialect (and the stutter, in Lamb’s case) so hard it’s illegible or embarrassing.
I trust you not to sound like two twenty-first century guys! May I ask what inspired it?
[edit] Oh! I forgot to ask you how the second season of Perry Mason is, since you are the person I know likeliest to be watching it!
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If Keith Moon didn't dislodge it, you definitely needed a plumber. It just feels like cheating that it didn't fix the problem.
how to write dialogue that doesn’t just sound like two 21st-century guys, without pushing the dialect (and the stutter, in Lamb’s case) so hard it’s illegible or embarrassing.
I trust you not to sound like two twenty-first century guys! May I ask what inspired it?
[edit] Oh! I forgot to ask you how the second season of Perry Mason is, since you are the person I know likeliest to be watching it!